Comments on: Musings (Poetry from a Deluded Mind) http://www.unrequited-love.com When good love goes nowhere... Thu, 02 Feb 2012 13:51:06 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.2.1 By: Ed http://www.unrequited-love.com/musings-poetry-from-a-deluded-mind/comment-page-1/#comment-3045 Ed Sun, 20 Mar 2011 05:35:58 +0000 http://www.unrequited-love.com/?page_id=8#comment-3045 MY BEST HAIKU Magical Gina Em'rald eyes sparkle and blaze Intoxicating ================================================== MY BEST VERSE And on the darkest of nights In the middle of a tragedy In came the brightest of lights The hair Your face Even the clothes I never thought even you could reach such heights The radiant beauty And as you turned and came to me The walls began to shimmer And suddenly there wasn't enough air in the room ================================================== MY BEST LYRICS ("Just Watching You Sleep") I've stared at the ceiling I've studied the walls I've roamed the darkened hallways Where there is no light at all To go down the stairs And back up again Is a fruitless way Of divesting this pain Because no tv Certainly no internet Can cleanse my soul Of the love I can't get Even play some music Or read a great book Nothing substitutes For taking just one look Because you see... I've done all these things But none give me peace Like the rapture I'd have Just watching you sleep ================================================== MY BEST MUSICAL COMPOSITION Is an instrumental, but here are the liner notes for Luna Bella "Italian for Earth's only natural satellite, whose unique qualities are reminiscent of the woman who supplied the inspiration for this composition, her radiant fair/dark beauty only being the most obvious of those characteristics." MY BEST HAIKU
Magical Gina
Em’rald eyes sparkle and blaze
Intoxicating
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MY BEST VERSE
And on the darkest of nights
In the middle of a tragedy
In came the brightest of lights
The hair
Your face
Even the clothes
I never thought even you could reach such heights
The radiant beauty
And as you turned and came to me
The walls began to shimmer
And suddenly there wasn’t enough air in the room
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MY BEST LYRICS (“Just Watching You Sleep”)
I’ve stared at the ceiling
I’ve studied the walls
I’ve roamed the darkened hallways
Where there is no light at all

To go down the stairs
And back up again
Is a fruitless way
Of divesting this pain

Because no tv
Certainly no internet
Can cleanse my soul
Of the love I can’t get

Even play some music
Or read a great book
Nothing substitutes
For taking just one look

Because you see…

I’ve done all these things
But none give me peace
Like the rapture I’d have
Just watching you sleep
==================================================
MY BEST MUSICAL COMPOSITION
Is an instrumental, but here are the liner notes for Luna Bella
“Italian for Earth’s only natural satellite, whose unique qualities are reminiscent of the woman who supplied the inspiration for this composition, her radiant fair/dark beauty only being the most obvious of those characteristics.”

]]> By: Longing for him http://www.unrequited-love.com/musings-poetry-from-a-deluded-mind/comment-page-1/#comment-2318 Longing for him Fri, 04 Feb 2011 14:53:54 +0000 http://www.unrequited-love.com/?page_id=8#comment-2318 Beautiful poem l.l. as well as the many sites you have about unrequited love. only someone experiencing this love can fully understand it. i am gonna carry this love for him forever. Beautiful poem l.l. as well as the many sites you have about unrequited love. only someone experiencing this love can fully understand it. i am gonna carry this love for him forever.

]]> By: Alistair http://www.unrequited-love.com/musings-poetry-from-a-deluded-mind/comment-page-1/#comment-1340 Alistair Mon, 25 Oct 2010 20:26:06 +0000 http://www.unrequited-love.com/?page_id=8#comment-1340 Thanks for posting. I feel the pain in your words. I feel it wherever I go, everyday. I will never have her. But the thought of me together with her, is the only thing standing in the way of not waking up for another day. Its the hope that makes me feel alive. Thanks for posting. I feel the pain in your words. I feel it wherever I go, everyday. I will never have her. But the thought of me together with her, is the only thing standing in the way of not waking up for another day. Its the hope that makes me feel alive.

]]> By: Lonesome Loser http://www.unrequited-love.com/musings-poetry-from-a-deluded-mind/comment-page-1/#comment-1197 Lonesome Loser Thu, 10 Jun 2010 21:00:20 +0000 http://www.unrequited-love.com/?page_id=8#comment-1197 Hi Varun, Thanks for commenting. Yeah, I think "I can never forgive you" is kind of mixed up and directed at both Jessica and myself... Hi Varun,
Thanks for commenting. Yeah, I think “I can never forgive you” is kind of mixed up and directed at both Jessica and myself…

]]> By: varun http://www.unrequited-love.com/musings-poetry-from-a-deluded-mind/comment-page-1/#comment-1195 varun Mon, 07 Jun 2010 22:30:06 +0000 http://www.unrequited-love.com/?page_id=8#comment-1195 this is pretty cool except probably the "i could never forgive you" part..i would more associate the emotion of i couldn't forgive myself (for loving you) with unrequited love. this is pretty cool except probably the “i could never forgive you” part..i would more associate the emotion of i couldn’t forgive myself (for loving you) with unrequited love.

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